#115524
An example I put together to demonstrate what I mean by the feedback that students 'need to add greater depth and detail to their analysis'. The 'snowy doves trooping amongst crows' quote from Act 1 Scene 5 of Romeo and Juliet is 'analysed' in increasing depth and detail to demonstrate what the expectation is / what it can look like. Feel free to use / adapt / change / copy with a different quote in mind etc.